Vulnerability = Stakes

Posted on March 9, 2010ADD COMMENTS

Contributor:  Snark the Reader


Vulnerability = Stakes

by Snark the Reader

Today I finished a fish-out-of-water comedy spec (with an A-list attachment) and sat back. I was full and happy. Hmmm. Now that’s an unusual feeling after reading a script. I scratched my head. How did the writer pull that off? I’ve covered a lot of good scripts but this one was particularly…vulnerable (in the best way).

The story is about a man who loses his job and must fend for his family in an unorthodox manner. He encounters truly funny, universally awkward situations. I rooted for him. I laughed. I shed tears.

The key to this script’s success? The main character is open and vulnerable because something close to him, or something he values, is always in jeopardy. It MATTERS to him. This is such a gift! It keeps the story pushing forward to the climax because he’s got to figure out problems, and one problem begets five related ones. We’re never bored.

I know what you’re thinking: This is SO obvious. Then why do I see plots with such IMPERSONAL problems like:

  • Saving the world. If you’re not Superman, I just don’t believe it. Even Batman limits himself to Gotham.
  • Living vicariously. Example: I read a story that focused on the B-character’s love life instead of the main character.
  • Trying to win over X but for not any reason that matters (stakes).

WHAT I’VE LEARNED: Show me why this character cares and I will follow him anywhere.

Snark the Reader is a reader in LA who has dug gems out of the slush pile, leaped tall buildings to show characters how to raise the stakes, and saved many a script from drowning.

More nuggets are regularly posted at: http://snarksscriptnuggets.blogspot.com and @SnarkTheReader

Read an eBook Week

Posted on March 8, 2010ADD COMMENTS

What will you read for Read an eBook Week? The future is upon us. Jump aboard.

Yes, yes. The smell of books, reading in the bathtub, writing in the margins, a bookshelf full of books, etc. etc. People will still have that choice and there are some books that simply can’t be replicated digitally. But when faced with a better option, consumers shift extremely quickly.

From Don’t Believe the E-book Skeptics by Nathan Bransford

Pop over to the “Read an eBook Week” Official Site for goodies such as:

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Last night, Anvil! The Story of Anvil won Best Documentary at the 25th Independent Spirit Awards here in downtown Los Angeles. If you haven’t seen it, do. You will witness — and be a part of — lives profoundly changing right before your eyes.

Anvil is Robb Reiner, Steve 'Lips' Kudlow,
and Glenn 'G5" Gyorffy

Congratulations Sacha Gervasi, Jeff Renfroe, Andrew Dickler, Chris Soos, and Rebecca Yeldham. And much respect to you Lips, Robb, and G5 for just being you. I’m honoured to have witnessed and shared this journey with all of you.

This, people, is how you change the world: vision, honesty, and killer filmmaking.

Anvil! The Story of Anvil.

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The 25th Independent Spirit Awards
Anvil! The Story of Anvil – Official Film Site (signed DVDs and posters available)
anvilmetal.com – Official Site of Anvil

Know Your Story

Posted on March 5, 2010ADD COMMENTS

If you haven’t heard, ScriptFrenzy month is nigh: April 1-30, 2010.

Whether you’re playing along or not, here’s a bit of sage advice for all writers from Greg Marcks–as posted on the ScriptFrenzy site.

I don’t have ten tips, or five tips, or even three tips. I can only give you one tip: Please, for the love of all that is holy, know your story before you start writing.

This is so much more difficult than it sounds. I always thought writing was exploratory, an attempt to exorcise a subconscious theme I was wrestling with. While this approach can work for short stories or short film scripts, it becomes unwieldy and time-consuming when tackling feature screenplays or novels.

BEFORE you type FADE IN:, plan the beginning, the middle, and the end.

Don’t know where to start? Try these on for size:

Don’t take our word for it, take Greg’s. Read the full post, “KNOW YOUR STORY by Greg Marcks” at ScriptFrenzy.org. And while you’re at it, pony up for the privilege. Donations to the wonder that is ScriptFrenzy can be made through The Office of Letters and Light.

Here’s a handy addition to your library. It’s the ICM Story Department Coverage Packet as posted by screenwriter and teacher Scott Meyers on his blog, “Go Into The Story“.

Scott Meyers

Scott Meyers of "Go Into the Story"

Meyers breaks down the packet and gives further explication on the basics such as the logline, character breakdowns, and adding personal comments. Valuable stuff, people. Read on.